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Love Down
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Love Down |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Love down, a new word used. I liked that word. Not a broken heart, just love down... Made sense to me. Heartbroken, how can a heart be broke? I guess when it comes down to it a heart can't be broke. A heart continues to beat~ a heart goes on~ a heart can forgive~ a heart can heal. Lovedown, have to remember that word, so the next time ya feel like your heart is broken, remember you aren't heartbroken, your feeling love down. Sounds so much better... Seems easier to accept than a broken heart..... {revised repost 8-12-05 still thankin you m'friend for your never ending advice and friendship..} I refuse to make plans past this moment in time.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll bet to know the person that led you to this heartfelt write... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I think you've invented a new word...It made me think of being let down....how appropriate is love down...I too know the feeling and you are right a heart doesn't break for it goes on beating silently waiting for someone to bring it to life again...A wonderful poem that leaves a person thoughtful....**big hugs** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Lovedown, I could restuff my pillow with that.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari, yes, I am sure the wisest man I know and a friend of the kind am really not deserving, but grateful for. Karen, thank you. Don't know all about that waiting for someone part, but the words fit right now. Yeah, and let down fits right in there also. Hugs to you for your kindness, always. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, thank you sweets. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Love Down? anything that doesn't last I have to beleive wasn't meant to be.  (please no hate mail anyone, this is just how I get through).What is the opposite of Love Down Donna?  I do enjoy how you think and write it out. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have no idea Susan, when you figure it out let me know wouldya?? thanks sweetie. yesterday is gone |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I like "Love Down" better than "heartbreak" too. It sounds like it might hurt less?? A good write, Hon. I enjoyed. Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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