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Can't Elope
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Can't Elope |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Can’t Elope Last night’s moon was melon lush with just a hint of haze making spongy clarity shine and two stars hung, south to north around that almost-gold-hung light ~ a linear line of sun was hanging slightly yet still, just before her fall off the horizon when neighbor’s starry windows started to peak. ~*~ I turned to you, on that day, a depth of well what now while eyes were misting, not because allergies resplendent hung with the ragweed and thistledown… but maybe, that seasonal emotion that plays strings and tempest and heart’s accord… as some buzz of life sings within the summer sin of grasses, skies, watching time. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
A hint of humor in a wash of romance. A tender touch from a sentimental heart. It can't get better than that. Nice to meet you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"as some buzz of life sings within the summer sin of grasses, skies, watching time." Elan....lovely!! :hug: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
vivid descriptions here..wow! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
stolen melons are always sweater used to hop the fence and get cantaloupes and honey dews they were so much better than those that grew in my yard kewl stuff ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
good to see you post again, I knew that when I did I would love your words. |
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