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Sahara Dry
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Sahara Dry |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It is odd this feeling of unfeeling I can sense how it grows within, stranger yet this desire that it should remain ...and, too, feeling no pain... Perhaps a blessing in disguise no more tears left to cry The well was used up long ago thus emotions stilled no longer flow left in this emptiness, I so alone Perhaps a blessing in disguise no more tears Sahara dry. I refuse to make plans past this moment in time.... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-12-2005 09:22 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
that would make a great name for a perfume Lovely poem, lovely heartfelt write Lady thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed...and you know I know |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Sad but words that flow, that can be read that create and demonstrate talent Life people say is an old friend - live is anything and everything whether you like it or not I liked your words Bodger |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
desert dry your eyes heart awash in flowing tears which is the better Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Heartfelt feelings that remain after the eyes dry...**big big hugs** Been there...know how you feel... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Beautiful poem! I love the title (and last line). I think there's a typo though, did you mean " to feel no pain" instead of " too feel no pain"? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Which is the better is no longer known in heart. Dry eyes hide the pain. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...dry eyes...  |
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