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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2005-03-16 11:20 AM

In softest whispers you come to me
across the waves of eternity
Forever afloat, my thoughts of you,
onward on currents of moments imbued~

Written of the moon-swept tides
that move so gently to this loving abide
Sweeping you closer to this heart
where nevermore, darling, will we part~

I welcome the changing of the moon
with each tender reminder of the swoon
Music in crescendo breaks
upon the shore rippling notes do make~

You come to me nightly, on whispers borne
until you reach this heart forlorn
I still wait, listening to
nightly note whispers ... only of you~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-03-16 11:24 AM

Oh Marge....this is ever so lovely! Nicely penned gal...hugs.

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

2 posted 2005-03-16 11:36 AM

AMAZING WRITE, MARGE...

...Becka

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-03-16 11:38 AM

BEAUTIFUL !!

Hugs, Chris

The earth laughs in flowers.
~ee. cummings~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-03-16 12:23 PM

Very lovely Marge!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-03-16 12:57 PM

"You come to me nightly, on whispers borne
until you reach this heart forlorn
I still wait, listening to
nightly note whispers ... only of you~"

*sigh*
perfection here.....

Betty
Senior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

6 posted 2005-03-16 09:44 PM

This is beautiful Marge.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

7 posted 2005-03-16 10:50 PM

Beautifully swooned!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-03-16 11:46 PM

Simply gorgeous, dear Marge!

...jo

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-03-17 07:12 AM

Margie, this made my day, and gave me a dream...if given any wish I would choose to live by the ocean....wonderfully enjoyed the beauty of this. Thank you

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2005-03-17 10:59 AM

loved it

one of your best writes

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2005-03-17 11:05 AM

Thank you all ... sometimes I don't know exactly 'where' a poem comes from, how it comes my way, what lovely Spirit whispers it to me ... but ... I KNOW when it's meant to be ... so I just let it flow~

AND THEN ... there comes the email message that lets me know just who and why ... so, Christy ... this one is yours,
not only FOR your friend ... but FROM your departed friend~

Appreciating each of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2005-03-17 07:24 PM

Lovely...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2005-03-17 08:55 PM

"You come to me nightly, on whispers borne
until you reach this heart forlorn
I still wait, listening to
nightly note whispers ... only of you~"

~ A lovely ~ and loving, spirit write.

Love & Eternal Light,
EO

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2005-03-18 10:16 AM

such a lovely capture of heart -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

15 posted 2005-03-20 08:55 AM

From title to ending line this write came in like a whisper on the waves.
Enjoyed.
TD

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2005-03-20 10:21 AM

I thank you kind folks for your comments~
Christy ... see what I mean ?
They are just the GREATEST !
Now you begin to understand 'why' I share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

17 posted 2005-04-18 10:54 AM

Wow Marge, to say this is beautiful seems to not do it justice. I swear I could hear the ocean rolling in. This is just outstanding. Loved it my friend.
Love & hugs,
Jules

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

18 posted 2005-04-18 11:06 AM

Your words whisper to the soul, while the reader drinks in the beauty of the picture... The rolling calm of the waves reflects in this poem, mesmerizing..

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

19 posted 2005-04-19 11:36 AM

Marge, this rolled me over and touched my heart. Beautiful whispers!

hugs and luvs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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