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My Phantoms
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My Phantoms |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Phantoms I have not found the common ground Nor have I found that common sound All I see are fireflies that Twinkle in the night time skies They flicker where I least expect A genuflect without connect And light a corner of the cave The smallest corner of my crave They do not form a link of light A star to guide me in the night They only promise that I may Find my goal of soul some day One cannot live on promised food Nor keep us warm when stripped and nude Yet fireflies that light the night Are to me a common sight Yet still I cannot hear the sound Nor bring the light to light the ground |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh me thinks this moth is gonna have to respectfully disagree with your closing couplet...youve lit up my life more than a time or two...me thinks your dragonfly IS a dandy Randy firefly.  I have not found the common ground I found it...and I been digging in it all weekend...LOL Still doing the landscaping at the house...today is GERANIUM day...LOL *ww*    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You are indeed a light in the hearts of many.... Morning Sy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy.... Well you sure light up a lot of lives around pipland!  Loved your morning rhyme... Time for tea? I'll pour. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good bright morning to you Sy you shine on, right into the hearts of all of us here, whether you know it or not |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! Well, one thing is for sure, if I were standing stripped and nude, I'd be thankful if it was only the light of a firefly that was shining upon me!  Enjoyed this morning's sonnetic offering! Have a glorious day!  EA |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Thanks for that one liked very much adagio |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Glad you found the common ground and are planting GERANIUM. WW LeeJ You mean a firefly. Nancy, You pour I'll drink to pipland. passing, It's always nice to know. Earth Angel It's only a fireflies light. adagio, You are more than welcome. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh yes you shine a light so bright that puts joy in our hearts smiles on our faces and wonders of why cant i find a heart and soul like yours in a man or just a good man your a star, shining bright~ giving joy and pure delight~ i use to collect fireflie and put them in a jar when i lived back east. miss them My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES May the fireflies light the way to your desires. |
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