Open Poetry #35 |
I Wash Each Day |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I Wash Each Day I wash away each day of grime With soap that’s made of passing time And dry myself each daily breeze The same that moves the stately trees I watch the clouds that fly above The changing colors that I love Where birds add mix with butterflies And shows a moon that turns the tides I walk the paths were walked before And store the memories of its awe The core of life that shows each day Each life that passes on its way And though I know each path of wend I cannot speak beyond its end I pay the price of time and toll And have my doubts about a soul And what I know for sure is strange That all I know for sure will change |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
wow, i've never thought of washing in this sense before...charming write sey... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh to see the world through your eyes Sy! Wonderful morning write! Much enjoyed. Tea is brewing..I'll pour. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good Morning Sy You've taken me on an out of body experience...shame on you!!! He, he...wishing you a fine day |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a delight of a write Sey, good morning sweets. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I Wash Each Day" ~ and so do I! Mind you, you have taken it beyond a daily bath or shower! You've taken it into the realm of the inner cleanse of mind and spirit. Mr. T., if you had walked in my shoes you would know beyond a shadow of a doubt that we have a soul that lives on forever. I could literally fill books of what I have personally witnessed and experienced. May you glow with life's flow, ~ Angel song of love, EA |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"And what I know for sure is strange That all I know for sure will change" That is beautifully stated, Sy. How true it is indeed. Just one request? Please don't ever change your sweet nature and poetic charms. We loves ya just the way you are. Loved this morning read. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Seymour .......... Very wise, and nicely versed. Bob |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
"And what I know for sure is strange That all I know for sure will change" WOW...VERY NICELY stated, Sy!! So beautiful...this mornings read...thank you! Becka |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
J.Samm Thank you for the charming answer. Nancy, You pour I'll drink. Hugs LeeJ Thank you sweety. Gentle, Some tea with the sweets? Earth Angel, Well you're closer then I am and besides I'm not too bright. Kit, Who could ask for anything more. Bob, Thank you much. Becka, The big WOW is good enough for me. Thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With soap that’s made of passing time ================================== you get extra winkies for that line... its so cool Randy is wearing a sweater...lol Randy washes behind his ears with your rhymes *ww* one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Charmed, your pen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you and miss you. wandering glider Charmed with your reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Boy... does it ever... and usually for the worse! LOL (Sorry... the pessimist portion of me is fully in charge these days *G*) This is fantastic, my friend... both beautiful and true! *S* |
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