Open Poetry #35 |
otherworldly |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
for you today I bring the other side image that side where we are the trees and the sky leaves us behind where we are a roads that we made alone we are the groved paths in parallel journey and we are the friendly worn of our own wheels slow turning into the fit of day dream recognition we are the curbless curves slow rounded down where we can pull over and be love metal reflecting the sunless warm with our windows down and our seats reclined til they touch together velvet to leather gloving _______ Dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, and wishing so, others out there saw the way you and many other poets see... Your a love song in your own...one very signficant Hiya and Good Morning Tremendous cup of coffee you serve up this morning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok...I've had my dark fix for the day.... now I can wake up. Love the smooth in this babe, well done. Especially enjoyed thisun.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tall, Dark & Handsome, I do believe that this may be my personal favourite of all your poems that I have had the pleasure of reading! This was exquisite ~ and a EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
yes, when i read your words, they take me to other worlds and i swim blithely through their essence - mmmmmmmmm - love your mind D S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
MUCH enjoyed! jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "we are the curbless curves slow rounded down where we can pull over and be love metal reflecting" otherworldy indeed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sighing* "we are the curbless curves slow rounded down" and then some, yes |
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