Is She There? - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2005-03-13 11:29 AM

Is She There?

The whispers of her footsteps brush my ear
And rouse a dormant well of bridled need.
A moment's pause will still the sudden fear,
That surely, with her presence, must recede.
Do lilacs tease these senses gingerly,
Or is my love a fevered touch away?
Is this her shadow striking vividly,
Or just a haunting phantom of dismay?
But slowly do my eyes discern the face
That satiates the hunger in my soul.
And with one firm yet wonderful embrace
We two, once incomplete, are rendered whole.

And then we lie in paradise regained,
To share love never blemished, marred or stained.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-13 03:00 PM

David, this is beautiful. I think
your poem answered your titled question.
Enjoyed!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-13 03:40 PM

Very very beautiful...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2005-03-13 05:43 PM

beautiful

TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

4 posted 2005-03-13 10:32 PM

Enchanting.

Enjoyed, thank you

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-03-14 01:03 AM

~Enjoyed the romance

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2005-03-14 01:26 AM

Dave what a beautiful feeling "paradise regained '

Hope

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

7 posted 2005-03-14 01:54 AM

beautiful job

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-03-14 05:12 AM

how could she not be`~

beautiful~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-03-14 08:16 AM

I believe strongly, that heartbreak and hard times, strengthes the passion and hearts of true love....and you have painted it's perfect horizon

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.