Open Poetry #35 |
I'm Still Here Nontheless |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I'm Still Here Nontheless Missed hearing from you Wherever you might be Could this be the ending That I have failed to see You told me not to worry Yet you are silent again It seems my recent tears Have been shed in vain If only my tears could talk In the dark place I dwell I'm still here nonetheless As these silent tears fell We had shared so much We've always got along I hoped you would tell me If something was wrong HopeĀ©2005 |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
wow really good write. you feel the emotion in the words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm on both sides of this...even on the same day what a roller coaster |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I hope that isn't for real Hope. It would be like putting the Crown Jewels in a supermarket. regards Dave |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
I've felt this pain before-you wrote it well. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~ I can't stand the silence, the not knowing is what kills you?????.... ~ARh "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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