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Ocean Wave |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
White on navy blue The horizon merges to ocean hue Sky and sea deepen to dark night, Winds cap and propel Where they’ll crash who can tell Perhaps on some beach in moonlight, How far will they run All the way to the rising sun, Will it be watched or out of sight? Gloom An aside to the merchant story |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Feeling the ocean waves~ ~Nice ~ARh  "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
All the way to the rising sun, Will it be watched or out of sight? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I've neer seen the sun rise from the ocean only set..... now I have ocean withdrawals : ) how are you old friend? Email me ~~ Connie ~~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Although it wasn't at sunset, this reminds me of boating on Lake Erie and also in the Gulf. What fun times! The wakes and swells, the ocean caps... and at SanDiego, the waves breaking against the jetties... I had forgotten other settings outside my home. Thank you for reminding me of them. Truly satisfying imagery here, Professor. |
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