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Open Poetry #35

Aristodemus

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-03-12 02:08 PM

From under a red cloak
It speaks

In green fields
Beside the blue sea
My love and I
Were happy

Where do I go now

And from whom do I seek
A fitting trophy
To lay upon our tomb

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-03-12 02:52 PM

An interesting man for the title, and a
very intriguing write.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2005-03-12 10:52 PM

Magnus,

Thank you.

I came upon him in:

http://www.ashbrook.org/publicat/thesis/brafford/home.html

John

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-01 01:44 PM

your poem is much readable, and beautiful than that

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