For a While - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #35

Post A Reply

Post New Topic

For a While

Go to Previous / Newer Topic

Back to Topic List

Go to Next / Older Topic

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-03-12 07:41 AM

For a While

I felt I spent a time of wile
In the real reality style
Under the rules of uncontrolled
I played the game of true unfold

A situation of amaze
I walked and talked this true of maze
Fenced with questions real of grime
In the sun of realities time

With negative and positive
The true of true of daily live
And I was caught within the day
The limits of realities way

I had to face each word of speech
And weigh the bodies of the leach
Stand upon the ground I stood
And act upon the things I would

And when I woke once more the sun
My day had only just begun

© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved

Marshalzu

Deputy Moderator 10 Tours

Deputy Moderator 10 Tours

Deputy Moderator 5 Tours

Deputy Moderator 1 Tour

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2005-03-12 07:43 AM

Wonderful writing

Andrew

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-03-12 07:45 AM

You're so busy when you sleep!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-03-12 08:06 AM

Marshalzu
Thank you for your time and patience.

Sunshine,
It is only in dreams I throw the blanket of reality off.

loveya:

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-03-12 08:21 AM

good morning Sy

dont have much time here this morning but wanted to stop in to read you

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

5 posted 2005-03-12 12:55 PM

nicely penned...

regards
sudhir

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2005-03-12 02:02 PM

A situation of amaze
===========================

yeppers, just like we view your poetry!!

I do so love seeing the days thru your amaze and cadenced charm.

*ww*

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

Magnus

Deputy Moderator 1 Tour

Deputy Moderator 1 Tour

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2005-03-12 02:25 PM

With all of this, I do totally agree. You
write wisdom and life most masterfully Sir Sy of
Tabin.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.