Open Poetry #35 |
But A Bud |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the roar as tender spring comes marching Just of green the timid shoots perk and emerge Still so shy in the contrary of becoming Lengthened days and bridled sun converge First to swell the hope of this time waking slowly Then to hear the winsome breeze of promise made All in all, a cautious outcome somewhat lonely Nature speaks a whisper close, in smile conveyed Smallest forward peers in homage to the east wind Reassurance made in changes by degrees Just as I have found this opening so vital Both the morn and night to find upon my knees A beginning stretches out in all directions Finally favored in release of soaking rain On a level intimate the seed of promise But a bud, the love we make blooms forth again Copyright Kkh 03/08/05 |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"On a level intimate the seed of promise But a bud, the love we make blooms forth again" brought it all together so beautifully, very nice enjoyed this |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This is so beautiful Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very lovely writing Kathleen. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Kathleen. Hugs~Nancy ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, you have just added to my anticipation for the coming of Spring. Lovely, lovely, lovely! May the coming vernal months be rejuvenating for you! ~ In keeping with your young and beautiful spirit! Love & Light, EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Spring *sighs* so soflty in this beauteous word-bloom~ 'A beginning stretches out in all directions' Oh ... oh ... I just LOVE that thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoooo! yes! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You write such beautiful poems, Kathleen. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"But a Bud" layered like warming green! Love the way you portrayed fragile awakening! miscee |
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