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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2005-02-15 11:30 AM

Don't,
Please don't let me go,
Don't let me be the one,
Don't let me say these words,
Don't let me cry over you,
Don't let me try to say
goodbye,
So don't let me go,
Don't let me go,
Don't let me be sad,
Don't let me feel bad,
Don't let me go,
Please don't let me go,
Feel me,
Touch me,
Then tell me
How do you feel?
Don't let me go,
Don't let me feel sad,
I want you to hold me
In your arms,
Let me feel warm breeze
Into me,
Let me feel nice,
Let me stay,
Let me lay my love for you,
Don't let me go,
Now,
My love,
Your love isn't enough for me,
Come on,
Lay your love on my heart,
So,
Please don't let me go,
Yet,
Don't let me go,

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-15 11:36 AM

VERY nice Vandana! Lovely.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2005-02-15 11:53 AM

Very good writing, Vandana. I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-15 11:54 AM

a sad but poignant plea....well done

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-15 12:14 PM

I relate to this

good write, very touching

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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5 posted 2005-02-17 03:50 PM

LeeJ got to the word first...poignant. Yeah, that's the one.

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-02-17 04:00 PM

And I was going to use it, too. *S* For it is... poignant... such a touching plea!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-02-17 04:06 PM

Dear vandana, you moved me with your plaintif pleas for love. Put please don't give the suject of your adoration too much power. We can lose ourself in the process. I have learned this through my own personal experience. Your writing has been improving by leaps and bounds! It is amazing that English isn't your first language!

Loving hugs,
EA

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2005-02-17 04:13 PM

Powerfuly said...and powerfuly felt.
Great job!

Eric

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-02-17 11:21 PM

Enjoyed...James

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