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Jell-o With Fruit_Chunky But Fluid |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Jell-o With Fruit_Chunky But Fluid it wasn't the fire_silk of mirror glass that tore skin and eyes lying in a puddle of unspoken un_shed [in]dependance nor the seekers tongue of pleasure amongst phalic_cyberskin undulating in erotic fashion against the palm of shadow_names scribed in the flow her flow her words seeping from his throbbing mind she didn't notice the vein pierced, by shameless want, her want her need her ... her ... she, the name thick on a tongue-walk hidden but oh! how it refuses the silent nature of a beast midnight green, sap filled cavities dripping from the selfish need of love, unrequited but he wears the brick of walls along his spine his fears, road_signs in the concave thirst he sketches on fresh pelt and she, thick of thought with pen in hand watches, silent, on shelves of grey, waiting blind to everything ... but his truth it only hurts when she's hidden ©sdt'04 "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
she didn't notice the vein pierced, by shameless want, her want her need her ... her ... she, the name thick on a tongue-walk hidden but oh! how it refuses the silent nature of a beast it only hurts when she's hidden  m'lady...you rock......  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you make it so worth being here. thank you!!! "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
JAY EEEE EL EL OH!!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Damnation! and that's a good thing - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well this is as good as it gets...enjoyed reading..thank you... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Amazing writing  Andrew |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to. |
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