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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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splinters from and exploding sun clapping hands with glass fingers and mirrors behind like memories on video in loop love replay does the dawn tiptoe with heavy boots on tin roof drums the clouds are sleepy grey blankets with holes and windows on purpose silly god and his designs said to call him abstract it gives him more freedom in his creations then he reminds me he is not but has always been the me of really me _________________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awwww, there ya go, that right side of you peeping out...onto a lawn of open waters your words pick up my heart tenderly with adoration smiles...seeing the whole of life as a carnival... Hugs, Good Morning and Happy Friday |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"the clouds are sleepy grey blankets with holes" ~ On cloudy days, I will be forever reminded of your words. And btw ~ your title tickled my fancy! And knowing and being the you of you, is a beautiful thing!   EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee j...thanks lady..it is going to be a dandy day (I called ahead) ____________________ EA you bless me, thank you for the eyes and the giggletickle smile |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There y'go, DS...sometimes we just have to put in our order for the day... Mine will be sunny and windy, blowing the last of Winter away... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
silly god and his designs said to call him abstract it gives him more freedom in his creations sometimes, dark man, i think the windows are seeing thru YOUR eyes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ 'splinters from and exploding sun clapping hands with glass fingers' .... the imagery so rich, so full~ I felt this brilliant piece shine all over me~ *SIGH* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Dark. Your imagery just keep getting better and better. ~Morning hugs and such~ ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such incredible images! *S* Your smiling title issued an invitation... I'm so glad I entered! *S* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This poem delights me - and the concept of abstract - oh I like that - and the me thoughts - that he and we are interconnected - I love how you see things - Morning  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 My spirit will rise |
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