Open Poetry #35 |
Three Statues |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
In port, from many times around the horns. I strut in boots that have known the decks of many ships to many seas on many trips in many storms. And yet I turn, away from my bronzed slender with it girl who loves the gold and what it buys, to gaze from eyes she will not see for all her ways of gaiety to watch you Cynthia, in your Sunday lace, blue ribboned hair; your emigrant face though worn and marred, as mine, by experience still alight with dream. And I feel alone, crowded in all the ways I've known: the what and whom I've become accustomed to, remembering a dream that seems renewed, watching you Cynthia bringing calm, calling home beside you. |
||
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved | |||
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Even though I risk the accusation that I sound like a wine commercial: The evening isn't complete without Huan Yi. |
||
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
RL, Thank you. This bit as the title suggests was elicited by three interior statures I have in my apartment, (Herbert’s Fragment by another and a poem by Z. Herbert). I very much want to do something influenced by a copy of a Kouros I just acquired but that is going to take time. http://www.basilstreet.com/shopping/product/detailmain.jsp?itemID=1 802&itemType=PRODUCT&RS=1&keyword=Kouros Thanks again for reading. John |
||
Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing Andrew |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This has a sense of "old world" quality, John. I like this one enough to library it, not only for future reading, but studying, as well. Thank you. |
||
Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
I strut in boots but not where anyone can see.(lol) I enjoyed this piece my friend. It does take you back to when... ~~Dara Beth~~ |
||
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. top ten. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |