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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-09 06:32 AM



So
It comes down
To this

The lace curtains
Unruffled
By any wind

These last hours
Despite any company

Waiting alone
For the end


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-09 09:52 AM


Huan Yi
Life is full of beginnings and ends. Enjoyed

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2 posted 2005-03-09 09:54 AM


Enjoyed

Andrew

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3 posted 2005-03-11 07:23 PM


there has to be an end before a begining

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-11 07:24 PM


Wonder what my end will be like...James
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2005-03-11 07:50 PM


James,

We are in agreement;  it is a very
hard thing to face without resorting to euphemisms
or evasions.

I think it will be very hard, but I don’t know that
I would want or welcome being distracted
instead.

Thanks for reading.

John

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6 posted 2005-03-11 07:54 PM


This hits home
as I held my father's hand
never known as PoP
except by
those who would wish

we slipped
the two of us
into a moment
of alone
together
a warmth, cooling
into a mist of eyes
pooling

he was PoP
to others

...

Thank you, John, for this opportunity to share.

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-03-11 08:26 PM


yeah...I know the feeling
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8 posted 2007-05-01 01:52 PM


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