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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-03-10 06:12 PM

I sit, a pen in hand, and wait
For inspiration cast that magic verse
-- But instead, you permeate my thoughts;
A vision dancing in my head,
The cascade of your flowing hair
Sweeping inner shores of my desire.

You have come and gone, but countless
Times; with a smile, a tear, a graceful stance;
A joyful walk; an airy dance --
With a song that rings an endless chime.

You and I, alone, but two
Loose shards of existence
Fitted together
Eternal Life unfolds --
Oh, Woman - My fate;
My blessing; my curse;
Dead without You; entwined in You -

Which Star have You come from?

CG

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-03-10 06:31 PM

An excellent read CG. What thoughts came to me in answer of this heartfelt write.
TD

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-03-10 06:40 PM

Thank you TD.

Care to share?

CG

Opoetry4me
Member

since 2002-10-11

Posts 126
Dixon, Ky USA

3 posted 2005-03-10 08:45 PM

CG~~I have a vision dancing in my head, but it isn't as beautiful as the picture you have painted here. Lovely write my friend!

Dara Beth

If life hands you a lemon... see if you can trade it for an orange or banana.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-03-10 08:45 PM

My Noble Knight,

Thy Words for me are tiny stars, that place the heavens lights in my eyes, eyes that shine only for you!

The Star I come from is the star of your universe....

I bow to my king, for I am not worthy of such beautiful words ...my chest aches.

Love,
Thy Fiery Lady

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-03-11 07:51 AM

This was ever so beautiful!

Thank you again~(smiles)

~Thy Lady Of Crimson Words

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-03-11 07:59 AM

CG, you are one highly romantic Canadian poet! Where were you when I was "single"?!?

EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-03-11 08:29 AM

are all Canadian's as such? If so, you've got a lot of warm fires going up there...smiles and hugs...excellent happy read

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-03-11 08:47 AM

I read this last night, and the title alone got a tune going around in my head, which took me on a journey of trying to find the original correct title and singer[s] and not being successful in doing so...

so I come back to find that this poem is as lovely in the dawn as it is in the twilight...and the tune is still haunting my mind...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2005-03-11 09:44 AM

Sunshine was it John Lennon? he has a song called "Woman"...???? Trying to help, I know how it feels to have it on the tip of your tongue and can't spit it out..LOL

~Love and Hugs ~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

10 posted 2005-03-11 10:16 AM

Oft in the distance, a Lady sits
chin resting on hands remembering the touch
inspired by the dance of words
and a desire to know more.

She has not come from a star, but the Moon
where shadows rise and fall upon Thee
whence come Thy Knightly duties.
Darkness, Thy friend in share.

There 'mongst many is the chosen,
being eyed by She, viewing that which lays
between the lines, warmth, softness.
A heart filled~~with verse.

To dance her dreams, hast come this She
In wait, This Lady in answer of Thee~~

Lady Ollyne

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2005-03-11 10:51 AM

good read

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-03-11 12:35 PM

very nice, yes

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

13 posted 2005-03-13 05:38 PM

very, very warming... LOL : )

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