Open Poetry #35 |
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So Says the Mirror |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I sit here in the darkness knowing I spite myself yet feelings can not remain hidden if truth is to be held accountable. I have learned to free that which wants freedom and if I must take the blame it is something I am so used to doing that the pain that remains is just another part of who I am and who I am meant to be... So I free you, to be who you are as I am always going to be me, the one who is never enough... so says the mirror ~A~ |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
![]() touching~ My spirit will rise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AMEN! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you will always be enough for me ![]() |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and if I must take the blame it is something I am so used to doing that the pain that remains is just another part of who I am and who I am meant to be..." Wonderful lines..and very felt. ![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is awesome... |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
between the layers, lies the truth in glass~~ thank you ~A~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
the mirror can only reflect our own perceptions - interpretations - this is well done - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
"so says the mirror" Powerful, i loved this, a perception of your reality through the mirror. C.J The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
your perception says this, but perhaps the onlooker is who they want to be...and want to share the burden with you. maybe you are enough? |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is an amazing piece of writing. Very much enjoyed. Chris ![]() Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
for myself and Alice...thank you for your caring thoughts... M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think there's a little bit of Alice in all of us. ![]() Hugging you. ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love it when you have these reflective conversations; very cool. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wonderful write Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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