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Abstraction |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Abstraction Turning back the hands of time Washed away the state of grime And through the looking glass I saw The face that haunts my evermore She danced with me emotions tune Beneath a magic silver moon And offered me her grace of fact That real had turned to lives abstract Once again I walked with her The one that brought my heart to stir Walked within my mind of green Again within the Eden scene We bathed within this garden store Danced within its grace of core Held each other in embrace Underneath forever’s lace And in its rose I caught the tear The one that lies forever near |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Once again I walked with her The one that brought my heart to stir and the dance is a fine one to share this morning Sy lovely write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful this is Sy! It reads like a daydream.. and how wonderful we have memories like these to relive. Once again you have placed a smile upon my face. Thank you for each and every morning you share your words with us. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You keep walking in those dreams, Sy... so that the rest of us may dance to your tune!    |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very beautiful Seymour. As always! You are one of the finest poets I know. And, I love to read your poetry. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So lovely Seymour. Thankyou for this. hugs, Chris  "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Lovely even though a bit sad. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, Sy, this was a heartbreaker, but so perfectly written, really drew the reader in, reading faster and faster, wanting it not to end.... Hugs and many thanks |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good Morning Sy ... A lovely way to start this morning. Thank you, as always. A bright sunny day here in the north country, but more snow on the way. Gosh, I am so ready for spring. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your abstraction is me winkie distraction. *L* *ww*    one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your word paintings ~ be they abstracts or representational realism ~ are fine works of art.  Please continue painting the skies, the land, the seas, the skies ~ and dreams, with your illustrious pen brush. Love & Light, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
*tearing* This was beautiful, Sy!! -- Becka |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
I agree with everyone else here Seymour, this was a wonderful piece. Dara Beth If life hands you a lemon... see if you can trade it for an orange or banana. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Held each other in embrace Underneath forever’s lace And in its rose I caught the tear The one that lies forever near This is absolutely lovely, my friend... excellent work! *S* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
evening sir thanks for another smile My spirit will rise |
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