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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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An unforgiving bitch, she leaves behind a bitter sting of cold to linger in her wake and she alone holds control to immobilize all that stands within her path..... She rules with a vengeance, raging... swift and sharp breath cutting to the core where even raw emotion cannot bleed.... Some, would call her frigid, but still..........she laughs...... Cold hearted, though she might seem, she can still bless the day with golden rays in her gentle persuasion reminding one and all, now in more subtle whispers she calls.... never underestimate what cannot be seen... I was here in the beginning, and shall be in the end, I can be your enemy or your friend... I am beauty, wisdom, and grace although you shall never see my face; you would know me by my name... I am a one, and only.... and still the same..... I am, I was, and always will be... never doubt the power that lies within me.... I really want to care, I want to feel something.... let me dig a little deeper..... NAH, still nothing... my give a DAMN is busted...Jodee |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow...Donna... I have been called that before..but I don't think I deserved it.  Hope all is well on this frigid day in PA. warm hugs M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
from 60 yesterday to 8 this morning... brrrr..... stay warm M. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You go girl! No one could have said this better!!! Big hugs~N. ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
WOW!!! Fierce, like today's stinging wind ~P |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
from the joys of drought and incredibly tepid weather - I send you warm hugs - you composed this very well - really breathed life into her -  susanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol...thanks all.... you know that old saying... Don't mess with Mother Nature.... ROTFLMAO  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent write Donna !! Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Let see.....I went from missing him and had maybe an ounce of taking him back......and then I found out something he did that was unforgiveable! Yep, I am pretty much feeling this and will always. I love this. Sami |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mother Nature has been called a lot of things ~ but a "bitch"?!? Oh, oh! You better watch out! It's not cice to fool ~ or taunt ~ Mother Nature! Seriously speaking, I enjoyed this shoot from the hip, tongue-in-cheek sort of write!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Donna, see? you are reaching deep, and this is amazing, I can relate, it is F-R-I-G-I-D here and yes . . . the sun still shines. I wish I had written this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! how'd I miss it? I'm losing my touch. Thanks for bringing it up Sue |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Good morning and thanks to each of you. Hugs. |
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