Open Poetry #35 |
draco's bath |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when amber spines the dragon and the sea is white string praying to be ropes that bind with brine the toucher's eyes a shadows dances in hollow wood with boots that are spurless but the gallop is there in the heel's memory a clatter of feathers on wet cotton shape shift finger songs strum the belly of woman palms on hand backs and knees that bleed when imagination conjurs a yacht with porcelain sides and a bow that fits the back like lovers leaning in comfort when spoons are their skin ends and the devourer waits to ravish just a whispered guess of yes ______________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a yacht with porcelain sides and a bow that fits the back like lovers leaning in comfort when spoons are their skin ends and the devourer waits to ravish just a whispered guess of yes ohhh yes, this was so complete, so warm and friendly, like a clear summer stream, washing down nature's rocks...gently hugging every crevice and crack, molding them round and smooth.... Ahhhhh, what a delightful read my friend. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You shift colors and swing notes... |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Enjoyed Andrew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger A walk over the coals. Enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Here dragon, dragon . . . lovely D - and I especially like the last stanza - so warm and enveloping - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks to you amigos and amigas..you bless me with your reviews...am pleased to have made a smile there |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a smile for you from a dragon My spirit will rise |
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