Open Poetry #35 |
Intoxication on a tuesday morning |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Its not yet come to fruition, and the unclarity of direction is a budding rose behind the blue horizon, and this rain that freefalls, is mere preamble to how the trees will don the wrappings of the night, as the beads of heaven shroud their lanky shoulders, and the sky that downed some perignon performs a masquerade for now, the blindfold pulls a little tighter and i long to feel you another time or two, before we end the joyous rendevouss that played its epic in the decadent delights of two lust driven strangers, i could probably skip the doubts and speculation, and just untie the dandelions and toss a bunch of wishes straight to the clairvoyance of the one who heralds me with dreamtalk, this is stuck between the rain rhythms and not yet written; as the outcome remains a bit elusive of whether i'll kiss you in epiphany or strike you with a stonefaced epitaph, let me rejoice for now in the playfulness of a drizzle, though i brace for the dousing of a battering wind upon me, either way, i'll watch through windows and view the composure of the trees, in a running stitch of silver rain or with limbs hit hard with sharpened icycles, they wear it well..... knowing on the threshold, there is always the reaping of the golden apple blossoms. **Happy birthday master [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-09-2005 08:25 AM).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
driven to know the unknown; whatever it may become, you're right, the blossoms soon to come... Enjoy your writing a lot! sadie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely Awesome InkedOne. a M and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
er keeping it now got too excited heh and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Tuesdays what inspiration! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
of whether i'll kiss you in epiphany or strike you with a stonefaced epitaph, I will bet for the kiss . . . *smile* (those lines were amazing, Michele.) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You do know, don't you...that you are a painter and not just a poet? This is so visual, so graphic....some of these pictures are going to be with me for a while. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
What an incredible gift offered through your words... if they try to take it back to the store, they should be shot. ;-) Your poetry slays me, IG. Indigo |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
just untie the dandelions and toss a bunch of wishes straight to the clairvoyance such wonderfully- blended images... enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Amazing write Mish, full of vivid imagery.... much enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Goddess, you are the consumate artist of word paintings! You glow, girl! Love & Light, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"i could probably skip the doubts and speculation, and just untie the dandelions and toss a bunch of wishes straight to the clairvoyance of the one who heralds me with dreamtalk, this is stuck between the rain rhythms and not yet written; as the outcome remains a bit elusive of whether i'll kiss you in epiphany or strike you with a stonefaced epitaph," Gee, tried to choose my favourite lines and ended up with almost the entire piece. Well done Michele, very much enjoyed!!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Ahhhh....! Beautiful birthday gift.... knowing on the threshold, there is always the reaping of the golden apple blossoms. Is that smile for me, or the sunlight in your eyes? Always a reaping- whether grim or joyous.... remember,taste the apple! ~P |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading nice of you to stop by |
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