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Do Feelings Really Matter?
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Do Feelings Really Matter? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Do Feelings Really Matter? When life forces alternatives to leave you suffering more, do you walk a zigzag path of new discharging feelings poor? Do you look into those eyes, to see what lies, exist the interplay, the trusting of, commitment in resist. Do you line the time, investing more give in, give up, just leave, sell off what means the most to you walk away from misperceive? Do you dwell, rely "midsummer's eve" and fantasy to dream hold on to love's once yesterday when quilted thoughts held seam. Unraveling now, what felt so real the quiet emptiness. The gifts in hands no longer mine just words now, nonetheless... I hold you in the type, my own that's all, I must confess. Velvet petals, deepened red and Baby's Breath in press. That's all there is, that is to hold when memories reel to real. Impossible once thought to be, the way you made me feel. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I hold you in the type, my own that's all, I must confess. Velvet petals, deepened red and Baby's Breath in press. Oh, Maureen, I am always a little afraid to read your poetry.... your feelings are so deep and true. hugs, Chris "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
painfully heartbreaking.... Hugs to you, this surely tugs on the heartstrings.... Good Morning Lady |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I'm touched here |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Maureen, this is sooo touching, so lovely and sad and lovely. heart hugs  Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
nice! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i ask the same, all of this ive thought myself...and youve written it all down for me... and very well i might add... enjoyed the sharing  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I just wish to thank anyone who has ever read me these last few months especially. I find it necessary to take my leave for now. Feelings really do matter~~ Maureen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen Yes, feelings really do matter! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I hold you in the type, my own that's all, I must confess. Velvet petals, deepened red and Baby's Breath in press. That's all there is, that is to hold when memories reel to real. Impossible once thought to be, the way you made me feel." Maureen..this aches to read. I feel your pain in this outpouring of feelings. Be well sweet lady. Heart hugs. ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Heck of an ending - can feel the ache all the way through - you move me to understanding and compassion - Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I agree with Martie. Moreover -- YOU matter. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
What a nice poem. I like the way you set the mood in this poem. Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know that makes me sad but I do understand I have felt like leaving many times myself |
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