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Open Poetry #35

Claustrophobia

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2005-03-06 08:51 PM

As the night drags on,
My mind turns restless.
Thinkin’ of all the problems,
Tryin’ to relieve some of the stress.

The atmosphere is so depressing,
Laden full of whispering screams.
Broken tragedies fill my thoughts,
And nothing is ever as it seems.

The air feels suffocating,
Pressing in on all sides.
Like a pillow over my head,
It covers all my cries.

Not like anyone was listening anyway.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-06 09:02 PM

I do understand

yes

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-03-06 09:31 PM

i hear you

and i understand

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2005-03-06 09:39 PM

enjoyed I know this feeling all to well.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2005-03-07 03:56 PM

Thanks for the replies everyone...

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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