Open Poetry #35 |
Champion of fire |
River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
A roaring lion syncronized to a crackling as a flame they are one voice raised in the rage of a heartbeat a body ready to swipe to fight to crush potency within the soul they are his eyes black deep as stone alive the fury so strongly held as a flash before the mind bold, he tells me all of his darkest fears his passions his tears and i beg to become one with those eyes his hurt his life his world How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
strong write powerfull words to :think: upon~ My spirit will rise |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
a strong sense of emotion to this - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow....good piece |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
River, Like Susan, I felt an outpouring of a strong sense of emotion. Very effective... sadie |
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