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Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2005-03-06 01:09 AM

Sitting alone in the dead of night
Watching the snow melt
Thinking of you
Wondering
Hoping
Watching the denizens of the night
As they ward of the moonburns
Wrapped heavily in the coats
Of their own failures
As I sit here surrounded by my own
Marinating in the stench
Caused by my dreams of holding you
Loving you
Again

There is no personal fact to this... anymore. This was inspired by Sserenity Blaze's response to Ratleader's request for the lamest poem we've written. Something about "If wishes were fishes mine would smell bad"
Ratleader's post can be found at: /pip/Forum29/HTML/001837.html

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

[This message has been edited by Ringo (03-06-2005 07:48 AM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-03-06 01:31 AM

Ringo,

this is one i will be keeping...excellent!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2005-03-06 02:20 PM

I betcha I can find another one ahahahaha

OMG I am so kidding, you know I am.

*smile*

I had to . . .

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2005-03-06 03:37 PM

SEA- Thanks for the kind words. They are always appreciated.

Sue- You just go away.
lol
Thanks for reaing this.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2005-03-06 05:09 PM

*laughing*

I'm glad one of my lame ass moments could be found inspiring, B.

I enjoyed this much, and hey? I'm glad to be of service, and if you can get this from a lame ass title of mine, feel free to hit the archives for more. Unfortunately I've plenty there, just waiting for some alchemy.

Well done bro.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2005-03-06 05:34 PM

Wrapped heavily in the coats
Of their own failures... very nice!

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

6 posted 2005-03-06 05:36 PM

K- Your reply had me laughing for a few minutes before I could hit reply. Thanks again for the laugh and the kind words.

Grover- Thank you for rading this.. your comments are always welcome.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2005-03-06 08:06 PM

Sadly,,,it seems love often ends in the failure of sitting alone,,missing the feeling of the loved one next to you,,,even when they are in the next room. nice scribble

An "M" shaped pancake,,,the things he does to make me smile,,,,,,,,

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2005-03-06 08:11 PM

Liked your clever wording to bring home the serious stuff in a very palatable manner!

~sadie

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