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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-06 01:27 PM



A snow hill
In a walking park
Along the river

Children making white castles
Holy angels
Dressed in furs against the cold

Bells on sleighs
Dinner smells
Music in the evening air

Pale blue eyes
Secret smiles

The sound of spurs
On wooden stairs

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1 posted 2005-03-06 01:53 PM


a vision of a memory

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-03-06 08:34 PM


enjoyed the scenery
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3 posted 2005-03-07 07:05 PM


Sounds magical, thanks for the wonderful read

Andrew

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4 posted 2005-03-07 07:07 PM


Just enough said!  I DO enjoy your writing.  
         sadie

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5 posted 2005-03-07 11:26 PM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2007-05-01 01:59 PM


peace.
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