Open Poetry #35 |
Puppy Flowers |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
And so I’m becoming used to you gliding in at three a.m. wanting nothing except to hope Perhaps the night will come when all is done witnessed by an autumn moon a boy and girl in the form of stars— will come together and never part |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
very pretty... miscee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Huan Yi Lovely thoughts, lovely write. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Puppy Flowers" what a cool thought! I enjoy your thoughts. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
unlike poppy flowers that wears many colors of dark~ ` My spirit will rise |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful title, wonderful poem and a read I most enjoyed. Andrew |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
to hope nothing more |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a beautiful dream!!! beautiful. |
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