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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-05 12:55 PM



And so
I’m becoming
used to you

gliding in at three a.m.
wanting nothing
except to hope

Perhaps
the night will come
when all is done
witnessed by an autumn moon

a boy and girl
in the form of stars—
will come together
and never part



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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-03-05 02:07 AM


I like this
miscellanea
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2 posted 2005-03-05 08:30 AM


very pretty...
        miscee

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-03-05 08:37 AM


Huan Yi
Lovely thoughts, lovely write.

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2005-03-05 09:15 AM


"Puppy Flowers"

what a cool thought!

I enjoy your thoughts.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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5 posted 2005-03-05 06:04 PM


unlike poppy flowers
that wears many colors of dark~
`

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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6 posted 2005-03-05 06:27 PM


Wonderful title, wonderful poem and a read I most enjoyed.

Andrew

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displaced
7 posted 2005-03-05 07:09 PM


to hope

nothing more

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8 posted 2007-05-01 02:05 PM


what a beautiful dream!!!

beautiful.

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