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MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

0 posted 2005-03-04 05:57 AM

God
put stars
up in the sky~
gave us faith
never to
give up
but always
try~

Plenty of
plants
lots of
trees~
animals
birds
butterflies

and bees~

Food
and water
to help
us grow~
life and
love
with beauty
to show~

When aplant
or animal
is neglected~
no loving
care
life is
rejected~

Plants
without water
wither
and die~
without love
same can
happen
to you
and I~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-04 05:58 AM

what hope! thank you for this!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-03-04 06:02 AM

your welcome m'friend~
hugs back at ya dixie~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-03-04 08:36 AM

Without love...
the spirit surely shrivels...

A very nice, uplifting write, Poet.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-03-04 08:37 AM

hugs for a painting filled with insight...and beauty thank you

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-03-04 08:42 AM

MGROVES
A delight to read.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-03-04 09:06 AM

thankyou all for kind replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2005-05-13 06:02 PM

I'm sure glad I found this. It is just what I've been looking for! Really enjoyed your thinking and presentation.

miscellanea

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-05-13 07:50 PM

thankyou, someone must of known
i needed to hear those words of hope
again too. never give up

bless you

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-05-14 09:47 PM

Nice message...James

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2005-05-15 04:38 AM

So true , with love to cherish hearts flourish

Hope

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2005-05-15 11:18 AM

Marcia~
The faith to fly
beyond this plain
Love carries us far
yet returns us again~

You are in lovely poetic form, lady~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

12 posted 2005-05-15 12:04 PM

Very nice and well said. And what you say is true. I like the structure of this poem too. Nice Job!

Kristabell

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2005-05-17 04:16 AM

Never, ever!!
It's all part of the process, and life is most certainly, worth nurturing.

Great message here, good poetess~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2005-05-17 07:38 AM

I only give up
when I see the rocks stacked
and even then I work the dreams
to find another way in

great thoughts ms G

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

15 posted 2005-05-17 07:58 AM

This is true. And, you put it so beautifully.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2005-05-18 07:27 PM

Reading again...beautiful message....James

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

17 posted 2005-05-18 10:05 PM

thanks to you all for your replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

18 posted 2005-05-20 06:22 AM

You speak a truth...but like it was a gospel..and yet it was always there all the time..but either we just dont see it..or cannot see it...ejoyed this poem...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

19 posted 2005-05-20 08:59 AM

Beautiful spirit and Hope in your words. Nicely done!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

20 posted 2012-05-20 06:52 PM

really needed this today. thank god he blessed me with all of you.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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