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This Errant Knight
Junior Member

since 2005-03-01

Posts 12
Paradise

0 posted 2005-03-03 10:27 PM

T’is aeon’s since mine quest began
And long since departure
With the loss of love in life.
Manys’ the tortuous road since travelled
Afore thine path did cross with mine.

E’re since that meeting of chance
This Errant Knights thoughts consume,
That Dear Lady you mayst grant a boon.
One night, one hour, one moment
Embrace me in thine bosom afore I die.

Mine quest too long in the making
And spanning life’s spring thru autumn,
Hast been far from straight and narrow
And as the twilight of a coming winter draws near
There is now cause to hasten completion.

If you would grant this Errant Knight thine boon
T’is in your arms I would recline
For thee to climb up behind mine eyes and see love.
From therein cast yourself upon my mind
So that our shadows may tremble in the candlelight.

Thence come, follow the moon with me
Till the sunlight breaks the morn
For that moment, that hour, that night
I am and you are, for that will be enough
And the glass shall bear shadows no more.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-03-03 10:31 PM

Welcome!

I am going to enjoy reading you

"If you would grant this Errant Knight thine boon
T’is in your arms I would recline
For thee to climb up behind mine eyes and see love.
From therein cast yourself upon my mind
So that our shadows may tremble in the candlelight."

whew...beautifully done!

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-03-03 10:33 PM

This is so romantic. Awesome write.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-03-03 10:48 PM

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-03-03 10:51 PM

I love the old world feel to this - and the romanticisim - Welcome - it shall be a great pleasure to read your work -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-03-03 11:02 PM

Welcome
Enjoyed your first post here.
ThisDiamond

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-03-04 01:15 AM

Welcome thy great and noble knight to the land of poetry and rhyme and may your quest be a happy one, filled with all of your hearts desires!

~Look forward to reading more!

Love and hugs
~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-03-04 01:40 AM

Welcome, Errant Knight, join us at the Round Table.

Lovely introductory poem.

Thank you.

CG

This Errant Knight
Junior Member

since 2005-03-01

Posts 12
Paradise

8 posted 2005-03-04 04:02 AM

Tis a fine welcome ye offer this humble Knight, and fine company I find meself in. Thank ye one and all for the welcome within these wonderous blue castle walls.

Life is the journey not the destination.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-03-04 04:51 AM

a warm welcome to thee~
with words of beauty that bring such
pleasure to one's eye and heart~

'

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2005-03-04 07:18 AM

Welcome sir knight to our humble home. You've written a lovely first entry that makes me confident that you will enjoy your stay here!

Please check your email for a special greeting.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2005-03-04 08:24 AM

Welcome to Passions...

You're in for a wonderful time.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2005-03-04 08:28 AM

Welcome to Passions, what a great entrance at that...loved this, please write more more more....

Thank you for sharing

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2005-03-04 08:42 AM

Welcome to Passions!
I'm sure you are going to enjoy it here!

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

14 posted 2005-03-04 09:25 AM

Time hast taken its toll
aging this face that waits for return
of mine Knight.

To climb up behind thine eyes,
to see love as love shouldst be viewed
To feel the sunlight break the morn
in arms of warmth
knowing, Spring follows the coldness of Winter
and Winter paths traveled together
will forge a union, shadows to become one
in the swaying of candlelight reflections.
This My Lord, is more than a Lady, Your Lady
could ask for.

I shall be waiting, however the length of time
for that moment ...when.

Lady Ollyne

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2005-03-04 02:14 PM

Errant Knight

"to climb up behind mine eyes and see love."

The above line is wonderful! Welcome to Passions!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2005-03-04 02:58 PM

good poem here

Welcome to Passions

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

17 posted 2005-03-04 03:02 PM

I am afraid I can only echo those who have gone before me, wonderful writing and welcome to Passions.

Andrew

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

18 posted 2005-03-06 09:18 AM

A second helping savored on the tongue.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

19 posted 2005-03-06 10:16 AM

Welcome, Sir Knight! Enjoyed your lovely poem! With your lance, spear us more!
~sadie

This Errant Knight
Junior Member

since 2005-03-01

Posts 12
Paradise

20 posted 2005-03-06 05:01 PM

I am humbled by the response of all of thee. I would thank all of ye.

This Errant Knight
Junior Member

since 2005-03-01

Posts 12
Paradise

21 posted 2005-03-06 05:09 PM

Tis humble thee all make me to be, with such generous words of welcome. Thank thee to all.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

22 posted 2005-03-06 05:45 PM

Very good!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

23 posted 2005-03-07 06:45 AM

And so I went looking for more of your words and I find myself flung back again into history. I may never want to leave what I believe must have been a wonderful era for knights and ladies walking hand in hand in a forest perhaps. Okay - back long enough to bid you welcome. I find your words captivating!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

24 posted 2005-03-07 10:29 AM

welcome to the passion

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