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Open Poetry #35

Valintine's Day Cry

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-02-14 06:23 PM

Thoughtless under intentions
clocked melted off your tire
door mind

Your fingers are so gentle your
face so innocent that is your true
tactics. yellow bellied and selfish
you are to yourself.

Little boy in a big man's body
hurt someone and don't care
just hang out and just don't
stare. take my heart and squesh it
in your hands on the day of lovers.

Make me cry please make me feel bad
seal my fate and make me want to die and
sulk in bed forever. For I am done with this
constant struggle of being a hopeless romantic

It just sends me into a constant state of
panic.

Betrayed I feel so [sorry edited]insane tried
and I did no time, for the crying out of your
blue eyes for pity on yourself,to make one feel better
sugar coat the truth in the end I crack and your not there
to catch me when I fall.

In the end it's me that is the one that saves myself.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-15-2005 01:01 AM).]

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2005-02-14 06:54 PM

"Little boy in a big man's body
hurt someone and don't care
just hang out and just don't
stare. take my heart and squesh it
in your hands on the day of lovers."

I hear the cry, feel the pain. Hoping better things come your way.

miscellanea

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-02-14 08:03 PM

thank you things are a little better today. i came home and to my surprized i found roses and chocolates that came in the mail from a dear freind of mine

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-02-14 11:22 PM

Nice writing...James

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2005-02-15 04:18 PM

Thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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