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Open Poetry #35

Snow.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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0 posted 2005-03-02 04:56 PM

Snow

White powdered snow lying softly on the ground,
covering hard grey surfaces,
the dulled tarmac of that car park.

Drifts form around those lean black towers,
artificial rays of light tumbling down,
into glistening pools of sparkling snow.

Threadbare trees carry tribute to the snowfall,
a smattering of purity upon those spindly branches
they whisper their aches and pains,
echoes in the wind.

Footprints lie there,
set to be examined,
the curious dance of a menagerie.

This has been reformatted, ever so slightly rewritten and most definitely reposted.

Andrew

passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-02 05:00 PM

cool write

I think I missed it the first time around

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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2 posted 2005-03-02 11:55 PM

"Threadbare trees carry tribute to the snowfall,
a smattering of purity upon those spindly branches
they whisper their aches and pains,
echoes in the wind."

glad you reposted this

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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3 posted 2005-03-05 02:22 PM

Thanks for the replies; they are most warmly received

Andrew

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