Open Poetry #35 |
Passing Time |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing Time The morning eats the nights convey The jewels of dew are put away The dress of moonlight laid aside The dawn has turned the evening tide The sun plays on the window sill The day awakes the whippoorwill The future knocks upon the door The sands of time awake once more Again I stand in fields of green Purvey the magic of the scene Watch a canvas of admire Drink a breakfast of desire Stretch my arms out to the sky Wish that I may never die Shed a tear of tired gray For years that sift my time away Its life and beauty that I weep The falter of eternal sleep |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Beautifully written poem. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
G'morning Sey nicely done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good morning you magical wizard of poetry...this was a happy song, one that left me feeling quit ready to start the day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sweetpoetess Thank you for the read and comment. Gentle, Thank you dear. passing, OH yeah. LeeJ, Good morning sweety, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Seymour! How about you pass some time with me? We'll sit and chat and drink some tea. ~Morning hugs for this lovely~ ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, The pleasure would be mine, tea and sympathy. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Time passes us all by Seymour - some quicker than others. Aren't we lucky to greet each morn? Especially if we have your wonderful words to embrace us. hugs, Chris |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Stretch my arms out to the sky Wish that I may never die Shed a tear of tired gray For years that sift my time away Its life and beauty that I weep The falter of eternal sleep" I think I am feeling this one too closely Seymour. Maybe it's because I have let my hair go white all the way! LOL. best, marty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God bless you, and your wondrously beautiful sonneteering spirit! ~ You should start charging me for all of your poems that have become a part of my trove of poetic treasures! Your body may not last 'til the end of time, but your spirit and your poetry certainly will! Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful! Excellent write, my friend!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sun plays on the window sill The day awakes the whippoorwill The future knocks upon the door The sands of time awake once more ~*~ Look at you GLOW! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris You are the sweetest. marty No harm in that. LOL Earth Angel Blessed by an Angel, who could ask more. If I may I'll send a suthern Thank you love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine But I can't match your sunshine. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Awesome poem, I really enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lost Dreamer And I enjoy your lovely replies. |
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