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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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where does the sound enter the night sides sky is it there behind the be ba yo where the alley cat is metal I can see the gypsy man with his ears in cans and his hands in fingers that reach to cars for wine I can see the shape shift trees playing with wind women in their short dresses with pale peeking limbs seeking like long legged neon children wading through the whisper bush searching for a father that doesn't say highway words when in anger or in love _________________ dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ran the gamut here from children to old men and then circled them as one... Excellent work, DS. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What a lovely capture - this picture you paint - and I love looking through your eyes -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sounds to me like levitation combined with meditation????? Course, just may be my mind set this morning, but...either way, you do most certainly transport the reader into a comfort zone...one of harmony and tranquil moments.... Hugs to ya |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
:: feeling this, darkie:::: **babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you say it like no other.... ~~*~~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "searching for a father that doesn't say highway words when in anger or in love" Loved this!  _________________ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you all for your eyes.. by the way...a clue into this bed, bath and beyond with some letters burned out....a parking lot by a freeway at 2:30 am...and echos from dreams and a wind blowing carrying sounds....etc etc |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you fly over the bridge that stops most of us then come back to show your treasures |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is just captivating sweetheart. I love what you do to me with words.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
fantabulous MrDee  Thanks for taking me there, allowing me to ride the wind over freeways and into dreams. Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
interesting~ My spirit will rise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey D....when do you sleep? |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
A parking lot by the freeway at 2:30 in the morning..? You weren't by chance practicing wheelies on your motorcycle now were you? Indi |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Playing catch-up is fine when the poetry is written in day-glow colors! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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