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Open Poetry #35

Somewhere InThe Middle

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-03-01 05:33 AM

Somewhere In The Middle

The centre of in- between
Still continuing in hope
Somewhere in the middle
Just me trying to cope

My heart trying to balance
  Often going to and fro
Somewhere in the middle
  Between high and low

Within the innermost core
  Was just emotional me
Somewhere in the middle
  Heart awaiting clarity

Heartstrings tugged upon
   I can hold on or let go
Somewhere in the middle
   Heart hangs in limbo

Hope©2005

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-03-01 12:25 PM

Hope~

'Somewhere in the middle
Heart awaiting clarity'

And this beautiful penning tells me that 'clarity' is coming~

Wonderful to read you, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

2 posted 2005-03-01 12:37 PM

I have a feeling that my life will always be in Limbo now

~sighing~
A

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-01 12:39 PM

nice way to describe

Good one

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-03-01 12:42 PM

know all to well the Limbo thing Hope. Keep reachin hon...never stop. HUGS

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-03-01 01:06 PM

Sometimes it is best to be in the middle, as long as you look both ways.
Great write!!
Enjoyed

JL

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-03-01 03:50 PM

Very nice! You've described it well, but I liked what JL said, too. There may be advantages... Enjoyed reading your poetry again.
~miscellanea

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

7 posted 2005-03-01 04:40 PM

This touches right where I am at now.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-03-01 06:06 PM

understanding this

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-03-01 06:23 PM

Wonderful writing...James

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