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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Each day when I lift up my head the weight begins its leave. Struggling to meet the meet of what there's to achieve. Even there within my heart letting go keeps score. Presses me, distresses me this shutting of the door. Years and years of what there was to now what would have been From night to mourn and morn to night untitled poems spin. Erasing then, allowing now tomorrows entering Finding you in shadows name the warmth of arms to bring. And so imagining, do I the all of what could be Rainbow bends in wrap around the ageless wants of me. The wind today will touchmedown mosaic set designed. The puzzling of whatcomesnext prevailing dreams to find. I write to feel and feel to write to break the bounds of time Surrendering the wisdom learned this heart, today in rhyme. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetWynterGal~ 'The wind today will touchmedown mosaic set designed. The puzzling of whatcomesnext prevailing dreams to find. I write to feel and feel to write to break the bounds of time Surrendering the wisdom learned this heart, today in rhyme.' Such lovely tessellations of rhymed thought~ A good Sunday morn to you, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning Marge, and thank you  M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Well expressed writing! You have such a pretty spirit with poetry to match! Have a good weekend. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and when you rhyme, it is a wonderful thing  yes |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
Hey there Maureen. Marge and I think this one is worth a bump around for another read. She showed it to me and I like the thoughts. How are things with you? We are doing great and have the yard back in shape after the hurricanes. Lots of new flowers we've put in. You gals need to come back down for a visit. -Bill |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And so imagining, do I the all of what could be Rainbow bends in wrap around the ageless wants of me. The wind today will touchmedown mosaic set designed. The puzzling of whatcomesnext prevailing dreams to find. I write to feel and feel to write to break the bounds of time Surrendering the wisdom learned this heart, today in rhyme. passionate and reaches to the core equisite writing... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Poignant and heartfelt as you move so fluidly through these difficult states... and the more we write, the more deeply we feel, and in feeling may we write ~P |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
this poem leaves me feeling speachless, i dont know what to say, its excellent and i loved it. C.J The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Always good poetry comes when you struggle with your muse Gloom |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ms. Bliss A most excellent read for me this morning, for reasons unknown, but are they? Perhaps it is the slow passing of winter that is the "erasing" of then...and the acceptance of it lingering the allowed now... "Erasing then, allowing now tomorrows entering Finding you in shadows name the warmth of arms to bring." The "shadows name" perhaps is spring? I see images in this poem of deep emotion, that are like vapors, which have been changed into substances touchable only by the readers mind...Good poetry.. ___________ice/ford ><> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are amazing yanno. I see hope in the shadows, every time I read you.  (kinda hard not to, what with them puppy dog eyes.. )giggle love ya mo (and he's absolutely right too) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am so glad you enjoyed my rhyming words... I am not so sure they are worthy of any praise...but thank you, I have enjoyed the responses this morning. M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You're breakin' my heart! You are writing a lot of sadness. How about a smile? JL |
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