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Snowmobiles |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
A hidden danger I see it Why don't you? Why do you have to make friends With the ditch before you comprehend hospitals white cold pain fear It's all okay with you But not with me First one then another yet stil another Good God how much more must I take the hospital white walls long hallways bike rides? what? no pain medication you hurt I see I'm not blind y'know insurance companies "get him out" he hurts can't they see funerals tears pain hurt white everywhere cold snow and machine and you still want to go out there can't you see? I'm so frightened for you I can't lose you too... "In the book of life the answers aren't in the back." Charlie Brown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This was very interesting and you are a good writer. Enjoyed, but "ouch" as Dixie said. marty |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very sad--but caring and love has no limits---and you obviously have a heart to be admired. enjoyed! |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Thank you. |
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