Open Poetry #35 |
The Neverending Story |
ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
The Neverending Story Today is the day of threes. In three days time, it will be The third of a month, Three months on from the Day you walked away. Tomorrow won’t be a day of threes. But I will awaken, life will go on. The story isn’t over yet. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it never seems to end, does it? |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Nope! But that could be a good thing...it's never over till it's over after all. I might have my friend again someday. So I suppose it would be worse if it was the end. Sorry that probably didn't make much sense! "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Not to me at the least. But that's okay. Nicely done. "In the book of life the answers aren't in the back." Charlie Brown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
yes! this is so true. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh my....I keep on reading these!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Understanding these feelings , yes its never over until its over Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your poem expresses this longing so powerfully ... when there is the counting going on, it means the related event is predominating. May things unfold for your highest good. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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