Open Poetry #35 |
Rain dance |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I feel like dancing, With my love In the rain, Beneath the maple tree, Two crazy people, Loving love till it ends, Until then I love you- And you love me too, My heart says so- And so do your eyes, Your shyness, And your slickness, Keeping my fiery heart- Filled with your beat, Each breath you take, And with each wink- You make me drunk, And each thought, Filled with joy, And I jump, And you jump with me, Being silly- In this rainy weather, Oh come now love, Let us stay out of a while, And let me hold you A bit longer, Don’t u feel the beat? My heart is making… My love, Don’t shun away now, This is where you belong, In my arms, as I in yours, Just like Romeo and Juliet, But our love is greater, For we can share it today, And not be afraid. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Don’t u feel the beat? My heart is making… um... ..what's with those strange letters? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loverly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Each breath you take, And with each wink- You make me drunk," really enjoyed this not much better than dancing in the rain.... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Another great write by you! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The heart is in the writing. |
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