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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-02-27 11:39 AM



There you sit
still
virginal
within the shadows
of adolescent trees

I never saw you
except in the company of other girls
gathered together at noon

I with the guys
playing fools
leaning against the wall

stealing glances
to where you were

Oh
how the angels
must have sighed



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-02-27 12:04 PM


ROTFL, not because the write is funny, but because my middle name is Jean (given first name Kathleen, therefore grew up being called Kathy though I go by the nickname Kacy.)
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-02-27 03:25 PM


hmmm...so was he writing about you Kacy?

John, I am enjoying your touch.

M

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-02-27 06:08 PM


good write
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-01 02:22 PM


top ten. I love this very much. typical.


beautiful poems.

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