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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-02-25 03:16 AM

I wish you
concupiscent milk,
from cows, that if they defecate
pile the meadows
with chocolate
as sweet as France could find.

With mile on mile
of orange groves
whose fruit, at night beneath the stars,
toward morning work
to squeeze their selves
to pails of smooth liquor.

And big farm boys
to bale the hay,
sweating bare-chested on summer days,
whose breasts heave large
with heavy sighs
beneath their poesied gazes.

The sun is low
upon the rows,
its waning light a soft adieu

whose lambent sense,
as aureole,

allows you now . . .
to dream.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2005-02-25 04:31 AM

Bare chested farm boys and chocolate...
I'm liking this!
Can I visit?!

Good dreams for me tonight!
lol Great write, John!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-02-25 07:51 AM

yummy...

the boys not the chocolate...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-25 08:28 AM

Beautiful

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-02-25 01:48 PM

Huan Yi

"With mile on mile
of orange groves
whose fruit, at night beneath the stars,
toward morning work
to squeeze their selves
to pails of smooth liquor."

Where I live now, used to be just that...I used to visit here on trips with my parents, calling it, "the country". Most of the orange trees are gone now, given way to ranch style homes and low slung concrete.

I like the way you write!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-02-25 02:01 PM

What Sissie said...
yep.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-02-25 05:19 PM

cool write

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-02-27 04:50 PM

LOL
those cow gifts got me laughing so hard I nearly spit out my coffee

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2005-02-27 05:08 PM

I'm so confused (as my name happens to be Karen) but I am nonetheless amused, too.

Even if it's not for me, I have to wonder--

"concupiscent milk,"

with CHOCOLATE no less!

I enjoyed this glimpse into your whimsical side, John.

Very much enjoyed.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

9 posted 2007-05-01 02:26 PM

still good.

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