Open Poetry #35 |
Sunday morning |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Pink dawn happening Rays spread like flower petals Greying clouds hover |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
very nice. yes, those clouds for us contain more snow I am afraid. hugs, Chris Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I like this very much! I think one too many syllables in last line (if writing a senryu) Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Thank you, Chris, your presence is always a present. Interloper: Thank you for your keen eye! and for signing Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Clouds covering state Emotions coloring time All a rosy hue |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Pretty. I'd never thought of rays spreading like flower petals--I like! miscellanea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
soft sunrise colors muted into pastel hues springtime does prevail |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The sun is soon up visiting this side of day good morning to you Hi Ken! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful one Ken!! We have snow clouds moving in tonight. Hey..a sunny day today though! ~Hugs & Smiles to you m'friend~ ~ The most beautiful poem ever written.. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Greying skies gather Precipitation threatens Oregon sunshine Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
morning described perfectly here |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sounds beautiful to me~~~ M |
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