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Open Poetry #35

Anticipation Of The Chase

C_ROK06
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 49

0 posted 2005-02-26 04:04 PM

As the sun beat down on the back of my nexk,
The sweat began to congregate on my brow,
I was never so nervous before as I was now.

Moments upon moments of anticipation,
Waiting for the whistle to blow.

There it is,
I hear it;
Calling me,
Enticing me,
Beckoning me forth.

At last,
Too strong for me to ignore,
And like a cheetah I spring out.

Chasing my pray as it moves ever which way,
Trying to evade me.

I find I must back down till it comes nearer again,
Daring to defeat me.

Too quick I become,
And easily do I catch it.

Steal it away,
And hurriedly I pray,
That my enemy will stay at a distance.

I passit about,
Get open and shout,
That I am in a position of use.

When it comes back to me,
Hurriedly I take careful aim,
Hoping to send it to its grave.

The orange netting embraces it,
Holding it near as I dance and run back.

My fame is short-lived,
But the chase will begin,
As the whistle is blown again.

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-02-27 12:50 PM

Awesome write but you have some grammatical errors. Like instead of Neck you wrote Nexk. Also instead of prey you wrote pray.

Poetry is beauty in words.

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