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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-02-26 08:31 AM

Clarity’s Light

Moon phases glisten
That I might see shadows dance
Gleeful fantasies

~*~

Then, it happens,
clarity’s light
comes from you, whether I see
a sliver of a smile or
fully effaced glee,
tickled as you were from
the slightest touch…

I sought to capture you…
but you phased away
with slim light time,
only to haunt my dreams
hanging persistent in
shadowed beams

Still, you stir me, as
I sense your pull and tug ~
so dear, dear moon,
dance the skies
from dusk till dawn…
and greet me with
a smiling yawn.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2005-02-26 08:34 AM

stunning piece! Just what I needed before heading to bed...ya, I'm back on midnights

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-02-26 08:39 AM

lovely view in words~~ the moon has been spectacular these last few days.

*s
M

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-02-26 08:44 AM

Sunshine
May all your wishes come to pass.

Susan
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walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-02-26 12:55 PM

Oh - this gifts warm heart smiles - thank you for the pleasure -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Martie

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5 posted 2005-02-26 01:01 PM

Sissie...you see with clairty and write with light...and what beauty you see day or night!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-02-26 01:28 PM

Karilea this is one of the most beautiful pieces
I have read in a long long time.
I love the blending of the pictures as well.
~Happy weekend hugs, hip-sis~

~ The most beautiful poem ever written..
was written by you in my heart ~

Nightshade

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just out of reach

7 posted 2005-02-26 06:52 PM

Agreeing with my sister here, and hugging you for this gem. Chrislane

kayjay
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Oregon

8 posted 2005-02-27 11:56 PM

You tease me with your yearning...
Oh...you're talking to the moon...dang

Beautiful phrasing, Sunshine. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2005-02-28 12:58 PM

Karilea, this is absolutely beautiful.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

10 posted 2005-02-28 01:05 AM

Enjoyed this, the contrasts and the oneness of these celestial influences.
Beautiful write, lady.

Goldenrose
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11 posted 2005-02-28 06:48 AM

A very beautiful write k...the moon is such a rare gem in our heavens...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2005-02-28 11:12 AM

oh I AM smiling....
I dont just love thisun....I ADORE it.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2005-02-28 11:14 AM

WOW Karilea

simply amazing in picture and words.....WOW!

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

LeeJ
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14 posted 2005-02-28 11:26 AM

I sought to capture you…
but you phased away
with slim light time,
only to haunt my dreams
hanging persistent in
shadowed beams

this was shear perfection dear lady
a wondrous mix of hues, slowly perfected into this great ball of orange flame...
outstanding!

ice
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Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

15 posted 2005-02-28 12:42 PM

Go ahead, capture
Whisper into night, your dreams,
Fluid or solid

Laugh every moon phase,
And "dance like no one's watching"

So good to be back here reading, and being inspired....

_________ice/ford
><>

miscellanea
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OH

16 posted 2005-02-28 12:45 PM

Sunshine,

Love your writing; it has special meaning to me. Beautiful!

miscellanea

suthern

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Louisiana

17 posted 2005-02-28 03:22 PM

Incredibly lovely. *S*

Ericc
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18 posted 2005-02-28 03:35 PM

Added to a list of growing favorites.

Thanks.

Eric

Janet Marie
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19 posted 2005-02-28 06:37 PM

I sought to capture you…
but you phased away
with slim light time,
only to haunt my dreams
hanging persistent in
shadowed beams

Still, you stir me, as
I sense your pull and tug ~
so dear, dear moon,
dance the skies
from dusk till dawn…
and greet me with
a smiling yawn
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I just love being poetically mooned.

lovely moonstruck verse.

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

vandana

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USA

20 posted 2005-02-28 07:26 PM

loved it

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