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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-07-01 07:36 AM

when indigo is a sky place
with strong legs
of soft marble
the trees are dark angels
speaking their wind

I listen in my boy skin
to the lovely vulgar
of their suggestions
then I realize they are one
and always have been

and that the man of me
outgrew the overalls
of my innocent a year ago
before the dreams
that introduced me

to something down under
my imagination
where the dark water waits
for a stranger to drink
and for an angel

to speak of her passed lovers
_____________
dark (scribblenote: passed on purpose)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2005-07-01 07:49 AM

boys get boring after they blow in and out
of town, lend me your man a while, and
let my indigo wrap you in deep purple

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-07-01 07:58 AM

writing hugs to you while chills grow up my arms....
tremendous write...and Good morning

Happy 4th hun...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-07-01 09:49 AM

interesting read d- a bit of melancholy here? i hope the boy of you is always there, the laughter and the silly - keeping that man of you smiling -

have a great weekend -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-07-01 11:10 AM

O wow D, this moved me. Waiting for an angel to speak...
there is just something so beautifully sad in that, but sooo lovely.
I dunno...maybe it's just me this morning,
but I really love this. Have a safe and happy holiday.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-07-01 11:52 AM

Very touching, DS.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2011-03-26 02:24 AM

I kind of just absorbed this - it is mesmerizing to me.

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2016-01-09 02:50 PM

I just "accidentally" came across this masterpiece of yours, dear D.! You are so missed here! This is of more than ten years ago, a decade ... and the poem is as uniquely powerful as if it had been written now and it will survive us all.

Love,
Margherita

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