Open Poetry #35 |
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Tndeer1 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 87TN. USA |
Most everyone who reads this poem believes that I was angry at the time I wrote it but I've never written a poem in anger. I only write what's in my heart and the truth as I see it. So as you read it, please keep this in mind. Thank You! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “AMERICA” We Pledge Our Allegiance as children in school And then we are taught that old Golden Rule We learn about pride and how freedom rings That justice will serve in all of these things They say to be proud of wars we have won Let's take a good look at what they have done There's Saudi, Korea and Vietnam too But lets not forget World War 1 and 2 Yet also there's others that ask for our aide Because we are strong and they're so afraid They say we are called the land of the free But I'm not so sure I really agree You see, we're the ones who's paying the cost Of all who have died and bodies now lost Yet right here at home our war's never end We fight to survive and pray that we win The drugs and abuse are out there each day And racism still has not gone away It's almost as though we've learned to accept The promises made that never are kept There's people that live in boxes out there With no food to eat and no-one to care We saw Waco held with flames all around And children have guns they're not putting down A bombing took lives of babies that day It also took mothers and fathers away There's times I can see that shiny black wall With names of the ones I don't know at all I see the white crosses on graves that they share Yet nobody knows who's buried in there Then high on a pole "Old Glory" will wave With honor and pride above every grave It seems man has made his own destiny He's eaten once more from Satan's sweet tree And look what this knowledge has taught everyone That we should be proud of wars we have won If we can take men and travel in space Then why can't we heal our own human race It's still up to us if we really care PLEASE wake up "AMERICA" we're dying out there © By:Freda H. Babinski 7-13-95 Tndeer1 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a write well done |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
very good. You "write as you see it". Your eyesight is very good. Your heart as well as your writing does you well. best marty |
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Tndeer1 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 87TN. USA |
Thank you for your understanding and sweet words. I am in a position of living with the results of two of these Wars and I see the pain it's caused. War is never any good but I suppose that as long as we're on this earth, Wars will exist. It's sad though. God Bless! Tndeer1 |
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