Open Poetry #35 |
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Covered with Love |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
(written for my son, Jay...Happy Father's day!) ![]() Covered with Love Your baby hands were big even then, big enough to reach out and touch the place where love is. You waved them like wings, trying to capture the light of dust that slipped around your curved palm. You opened something with your tiny fingers, something invisible, made from heaven’s weave, then you wrapped me in it and it gave me grace. Now, with your big blanket of love, I see you have found the same fabric, for you cover her with such tenderness that I weep. I could never find the words to tell you. Now you know. --------- I was reminded of this poem by Marge in her poem located here:/pip/Forum92/HTML/003536.html It really is amazing to watch your son become a loving father...I'm sure proud of mine! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A priceless gift...a treasure that you have been blessed in having. He got his genes from you, surely he did! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I saw photos of a Jaysmile today... This will only make him beam even more... ![]() Thanks, Sissie, for sharing the times that I saw in dreams... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Simply beautiful, Martie. And how blessed you are to see the world go round. |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
oh my stars... what a beautiful little creature of God up there... aint we so lucky? all these babies that God is giving us mine just keep growing, and growing and I hope that I am lucky enough to watch them love one of their own someday I LOVED THIS makes me wanna dig thru the pics of the kids and remember when they were that small...even the smallest now of 8 months feels like a lifetime away since she was "swaddled" Thank you for sharing this with us |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I rem reading this beautiful poem, I'm so glad you reposted. ![]() Mxx p.s: sooo? have you tried it yet? or are you too afraid to? or is it you think you can't tell me you hated it? it's ok if you did *smile* love you lady. "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You opened something with your tiny fingers, something invisible, made from heaven’s weave, then you wrapped me in it and it gave me grace. so brilliantly reflects the changes which grope ur way through life...tranformations, perceptions, human interaction, unconditional love...and the beauty of relaitonships, of all kinds... there is nothing like a son....and watching him father his own....an essay and color of joy, so sturdy, nothing can ever break this house down... Oh, you have moved me with this, deeply and delicately.... Hugs to ya Martie.... Love Lee J. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Covered with love.....a good place to be, from one end of life to the other.....and I have a feeling that's how it is for you. You're truly a poet of the heart, and it shines from you like a crystal lamp when you write of these things. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyMartieSis~ Oh ... I remember this sooooo well~ In our motherly hearts ... the memories always stay~ Yeah ... know that 'proud' feeling too~ ![]() Thank you for reposting ... how time flies much too quickly~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
![]() bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Such a sweet sharing! Enjoyed very much! cathy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Martie.. And it does bring tears to the eyes to see our own sons become fathers. ...it seems like yesterday we held our precious bundle oh so tight. Thank you for your wonderful words. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Wonderful Martie - it is amazing when those little boys become fathers and you see them with your grandkids - this is great - Paul |
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