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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-06-30 07:48 AM

I changed the wallpaper plate
on my mind table
your cake and eat it too
still was melted sticky
like snow on my beard

but I needed a frisbee then
more than memories
and once the other dogs had tasted
I knew I would never get it back
and it wouldn't be proper too

to ask for second time seconds
when there were toothmarks
in the relationship
but I miss the spoon
that you made a ring from

and how the neighbors smiled
when you washed the windows
in your swimsuit
and I wish we would have had some
windows of our own

but then again we were just trees

_____________
dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-06-30 08:03 AM

hey, trees have windows? yeah they do, take another look at the keebler tree...

Morning D...wishing you a fine day, thanks so much for this seaside park of yours...wonderfully written, as always...hope all is well out there where you are...hugs...me

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-06-30 08:30 AM

gawd I love this
got to the end and yanno what I did?
Smiled....

Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-06-30 08:58 AM

I get the sense of a long-legged, silky red-haired

labrador...having the time of her life with that frisbee...

Smiling at how you twist a scene just so...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-06-30 09:22 AM

definitely ~smiling~

picturing this

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-06-30 09:32 AM

"when there were toothmarks
in the relationship"

love that line...some relationships leave toothmarks and others take a chunk out of you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-07-01 09:51 AM

this has some amazing stuff in it - love how your mind works and the word play it spills -

S

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-07-01 10:37 AM

~sighing~ now I'm lost in memoryland...days of frisbees in the surf, salty air and sticky sand clinging to wet bodies, sunsets to live for

see what this write has triggered?

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

8 posted 2005-07-01 10:55 AM

This is fantastik!!!

Echoing Susans reply....

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